Posted by: John Looker | 8 October, 2010

AUTUMN HAIKU

I’ve added a second since the first posting.

And now a third and final one:


AUTUMN HAIKU

(1)

Autumn as usual.
We know these golds, ambers, reds;
so why do they thrill?

(2)

Raking fallen leaves
that litter the long wet grass,
one jumps. It’s a frog! 

(3)

Yellow leaves take flight,
starlings float against the sky,
and the years drift by.


© John Stevens 2010

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  1. The first one is brilliant. A little curious perhaps. The second one is shocking! haha.

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    • Thanks a lot Brad. I jumped as much as the frog!

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  2. Very nice indeed, John; you’ve packed a lot if ideas into seventeen syllables, which is what this form (one of my favourites) is all about. And FWIW, I’ve never thought your poems are too long; personally, I enjoy every word!

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    • Thanks Nick. We seem to have been reading each other’s blogs at the same time by chance today. Let’s hear more about those tractors, a much neglected source of inspiration in poetry!

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  3. Really like your new ones, John – absooutely true to the haiku tradition.

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  4. I love the frog one. The word “litter” is so wonderful here.

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